THE Sentence:
The fight had made Mark something of a hero, and the whole story was going around school in various versions, all different.
from That Was Then, This Is Now by S.E. Hinton
This sentence puts two thoughts together into one sentence that flows very well.
MY Sentence:
The show had made Sally popular over night, and the rumor was no longer true that she stole the main lead, all a lie.
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