THE Sentence:
I met Erik's eyes and saw the vulnerability through the pretend confidence of his smile.
from Hunted by P.C. Cast and Kristen Cast
This sentence uses very good adjectives to describe not only the visual way things looked, but also reveals the hidden feelings.
MY Sentence:
I saw the dog for the first time and saw the anguish in his eyes through the lop-sided grin.
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