Monday, October 12, 2009

Sentence 2

THE Sentence:
So it had been two years since I'd been around a horse, but it came back to me instantly-all of it.
from Marked by P.C. Cast and Kristen Cast

This sentence begins in a past tense but switches to present and then uses a dash to emphasize the intensity of the previous words.

MY Sentence:
So I hadn't done my homework in quiet sometime, but it became necessary towards the end of the nine weeks-all in one week!

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