Sentence 9

THE Sentence:
And then I was in his arms, kissing him, and our tears mingled together as we laughed and cried and held each other.
from Hunted by P.C. Cast and Kristen Cast

This sentence has a lot of repeating verbs and verb phrases that seem to suggest that there was a lot of action found in the context.

MY Sentence:
And then I was stumbling, searching around, and my phone wasn't working as I cried and prayed and hoped for help in the dark.