Tone Anylasis
Chopin's glimmering realization of her existence seems both uplifiting and sorrowful showing both her true placement in society and the new knowledge deemed only to her that sits so weightfully upon her shoulders.
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This is really good. I definitely liked the picture and the syntax analysis. I agree with that society views her simple and then then as she's learning more she becomes more complex. Do you think this is good for her or bad? Do all women get this sudden image of herself and her place in society?
Your sentence really portrays the woman she wants to become. It's an incrediably accurate picture for this sentence. Does she feel like the realization of this is too much for her? Does this break some women down? I believe that other women are having these sudden images too, but do you think they are all keeping it hidden from each other because of the habitual life they are living?
I love the use of the wordle. It shows the complexity of her situations and how chaotic her thoughts are as she learns more about herself, how she should be, and how she wants to be.
The wordle portrays a sense of complexity but for some viewers it would confuse and prohibit their reading of the sentence.
Are these changes good or bad, well I believe that this would be based on personal opinons. With the wordle, I wanted to capture the complex feelings a woman would have but it was also to highlight the main points of the sentence.
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